There are many who believe I have been far too long
but at least now I know now who was making so much noise in the next door
cave during that long cold snap we had a while ago
L
On Sun, July 29, 2012 18:43, Patrick McManus wrote:
> The sort of ones I used back in the old cave last Ice Age -Upton would be
> far too long
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
> Sent: 29 July 2012 17:38
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: snap: mixing it
>
>
> what sort of sounds?
>
> L
>
>
> On Sun, July 29, 2012 18:34, Patrick McManus wrote:
> sounds up my street
>
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
>> On Behalf Of Jill Jones
>> Sent: 25 July 2012 15:53
>> To: [log in to unmask]
>> Subject: Re: snap: mixing it
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks Doug, Lawrence,
>>
>>
>>
>> It *is* a mix, based on two exercises I set for students this week in
>> a new course. So, it is partly remnants of an abecedarian poem and partly
>> a remnant of writing a poem with words of only one syllable.
>>
>> In one class I wrote along with them and played with/rewrote those
>> drafts today.
>>
>> Interestingly, one class was troubled by single syllables and the
>> other was not so much, and one class made more, rather than less, 'sense'
>> with the a-z writing. All had fun (I think). The 'xerox zepp' line is
>> the only line/phrase of mine that remains intact from the first
> iteration.
>>
>> J
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On 26/07/2012, at 12:00 AM, Douglas Barbour wrote:
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>>
>>> Alway get those zeppelins, Jill. This moves, fast.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Doug
>>> On 2012-07-25, at 1:17 AM, Jill Jones wrote:
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Bird dream gone
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> past rain, past
>>>>
>>>> lies, motives, niches
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Home not home
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> till you flee
>>>>
>>>> reject stupid traffic
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> In rich air
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> roll fast hours
>>>>
>>>> upon vagrant wastes
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Wish for wing
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> sky, rain or
>>>>
>>>> xerox your zeppelins
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> ________________________
>>>> Jill Jones
>>>> www.jilljones.com.au
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>> Douglas Barbour
>>> [log in to unmask]
>>>
>>> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
>>> http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Latest books:
>>> Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy)
>>> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962
>>> Wednesdays'
>>>
>>>
>>>
>> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-pres
>> s_1 0.h
>> tml
>>>
>>>
>>> Why can't words mean what they say?
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Robert Kroetsch
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>
> -----
> Lawrence Upton
> Visiting Fellow, Music Dept,
> Goldsmiths, University of London
> New Cross, London SE14 6NW
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Lawrence Upton
Visiting Fellow, Music Dept,
Goldsmiths, University of London
New Cross, London SE14 6NW
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