What I like is that it's sound waves too, which you get right in to the lines...
Doug
On 2012-06-21, at 3:15 AM, andrew burke wrote:
> reworked Snap, now called -
>
> *WAVES*
>
> rain crescendo
> dogs crest fallen
> day dampens
>
> kitchen tap drips
> pianissimo
>
> cross currents of
> changing seasons
> unsettle
>
> house holds tight
> to her foundations
>
> a Northumbrian
> *spoke*-shaver's *Coracle*
> rides the waves
>
> a gift to a hermit
> in his dotage
>
> sound waves
> light waves
> 'waves wave without greeting'*
>
> ...
> **a quote from Jill Jones poem*
>
> --
> Andrew
> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
>
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