On 19/04/12 13:49, sharon brogan wrote:
> It's Not You
>
> What you read in these lines
> is not you. A kestrel takes
> a sparrow from the garden.
> Neither of them is you.
Mixed feelings about the second person address here... sorry, can't
offer any constructive comment. I do, however, share a difficulty with
the second person address in writing my own work. Difficult, because,
from my POV as a writer I feel as if I am accusing the reader of
something I am guilty of... what do I have to admit wrt to my guilt?
That I have survived as a gay man and not died of AIDS... survivor guilt?
Hope this comment makes sense from my position and my difficulties with
second person address?
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http://abdevpoetics.blogspot.com.au/
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