On 27/04/12 19:02, Lawrence Upton wrote:
>> What if I told you it took me six hours to roll a piece of paper into my
> typewriter
>
> just as a kind of poem, aware of the context but also reading it as if
> without that context
I liked the line, as well. But how to follow up on such a strong
narrative hook line???? Maybe it is worth a try, so how about this as a
starter...
What if I told you it took six hours to roll a piece of paper into my
typewriter
submachine gun fire burst in side-less civil wars
mixing genres with a failure of nerve a-logical thought
it rains so hard notebooks are fountain pen ink washing away
wet getting wetter and dry becomes shifting dunes
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