I really enjoyed this....
can I suggest a couple of extra lines and a sonnet?
On 26/03/12 04:56, Dominic Fox wrote:
> Indisposed, that is, by innermost
> disposition; or perhaps hormonal
> balls-up wrongly diagnosed as lost-
>
> Eden complex - sheen of kitchen-vinyl
> drying in sunlight being the Eden I
> cycle back to. Be it ingrown kernel
>
> or stock implant, perennial sci-fi
> premise, there is memory at last
> to cling to or set down beside the way.
>
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