that space in the middle is the contribution of a processor or processors
somewhere
it's quite a nice idea, but it maybe too large -- processors have no sense
of animal reality -- and I had thought I entered a line break
L
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Subject: The Bar between St Agnes and The Gugh submerging : from Wingletang
From: "Lawrence Upton" <[log in to unmask]>
Date: Sun, January 22, 2012 08:59
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Between the large waves, top sand dries --
its colour fading; shinily --
but less so as waves overtake
each other, darkening ground, ocean
depth
visually rendered
expressed momentarily
an
exposed
sea either side raised up,
spilling,
flan case disintegrating, fills
annihilating weak images
metaphor and form and memories
the east of the bar churning
fleetingly below enveloping sea’s
gush,
sand saturated,
water almost
continuous,
cover incomplete
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UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
wfuk.org.uk/blog
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