I'll work out which one was _the earlier one_ and have a think
Thanks as always
L
On Thu, December 29, 2011 18:15, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> I like this for its short, sharp action, Lawrence.
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> The earlier one perhaps included too much thought about...? The good
> sudden moments enclosed somewhat...
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> Doug
> On 2011-12-29, at 9:32 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
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>> From the right of the slipway, and across
>> halfway, and to the bar centre; between the porth and cove, threads of
>> rotten tapestry now disintegrating, thrown on the floor.
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>> At their end, they swivel back, a short length
>> which meets a straight edge coming from the north. Between these, under
>> the flattened wigwam, large pebbles, weeds, but mostly disturbed sand.
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>> Above, grey at each side the bar’s high waist;
>> and, further still, chaos of browned over rocks, taking hold of all the
>> rising east.
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>> Round the south curve from bar into island,
>> ground cover of seaweed tangled stranded layering its bright sun
>> shimmering darkness.
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