L I beg your pardon -huff!!
You write about bars/porths ------
Ok now in very basic English with the fun taken out!
-(with schoolmasterly gloom heavy plodding)
-I just wondered if you had any cheery poems coming up about Cornwall
-do you understand???????????????:-)
Gosh a flame war erupting !!
I hope to off to Occupy London soon!
Cheers Patrick
-----Original Message-----
From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
Sent: 16 January 2012 21:38
To: [log in to unmask]
Subject: Re: The bar between The Gugh and St Agnes seen from St Agnes
I beg your pardon?
Would you mind speaking English? I really have specific ideas about what you
are saying or asking
L
On Mon, January 16, 2012 20:58, Patrick McManus wrote:
> Hey Lawrence any cheery bars coming up your fun loving self frolicking
> on the porth!!!???
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> On Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
> Sent: 16 January 2012 10:03
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: The bar between The Gugh and St Agnes seen from St Agnes
>
>
> Two rectangles of stone, the one light brown, strong sun shine
> suggesting gold troubling sea rapacious automatically, breaking it
> up; both areas shattered, skull heaps and, next, other weak grey,
> merging into blank sand swell
>
> neither is squared off broken mosaic perhaps one never finished a
> start
made
> abandoned as sea rose later that day -- one daft place to demonstrate
> civilization.
>
> organic, what look like old walls; just random, what might be significant.
>
>
> tyre tracks thrusting across the dune vanishing among grasses and
> pebbles patternless
>
> a chance of fragmented evidence of loss
>
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> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
> wfuk.org.uk/blog ----
>
>
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UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
wfuk.org.uk/blog
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