Being told spelled spelt? Out bad
as opposed to the poem implying -good
back to feeding the cat and a cuppa
P poetasterer
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Subject: Re: St Ives Harbour from The Malakoff
Well, "editorial" in a manner of speaking, Lawrence.
Serving the tri-state area.
Hal
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On Mon, Nov 7, 2011 at 9:22 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> mm
>
> I wonder how
>
> That's not a question - just another editorial!
>
> I'm intrigued by the idea of those lines being editorial comments; I
> hadn't seen them like that
>
> I have -- seconds ago -- emailed someone saying _I'll have to think about
> that_ re something else and here I go again
>
> Good question. mmmm. I wasn't entirely sure about that poem in the first
> place
>
> probably time to go to the grocery shop
>
> thanks
>
> L
>
> On Mon, November 7, 2011 15:08, Halvard Johnson wrote:
> > Good images, Lawrence, but, I think, I could do without the editorial
> > comments, as in line 5, 11, and 14-15. Can't the images be made to do the
> > heavy lifting?
> >
> >
> > Serving the tri-state area.
> >
> >
> > Hal
> >
> >
> > Halvard Johnson
> > ================
> >
> >
> > [log in to unmask] http://sites.google.com/site/halvardjohnson/Home
> > http://entropyandme.blogspot.com
> > http://imageswithoutwords.blogspot.com
> > http://www.hamiltonstone.org
> > <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/>
> > http://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/home
> > <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/>
> > Remains To Be
> > Seen<
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tII1LvsGmJpmLby_dyie77p3D2u2sAwc
> > JL3TuW5T-nY/edit?hl=en_US>
> > *, Remains To Be Seen (Vol.
> > II)<
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/198kwjOUuDuROG50BpMvKu_05auLcYh1Ce0
> > 3rHqsSBNE/edit?hl=en_US>
> > ,** Remains To Be Seen (Vol.
> > III)<
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JW0nJh3tEtKzCu4hya0mYSU04EA0sz6hR
> > M90eTgzhyw/edit?hl=en_US>
> > , *Sonnets from the Basque & Other
> > Poems<
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/16pWoy7FBSWyCLWpz0hhI-i0BOYjSBeUi
> > qfWBmJF3g64/edit?hl=en_US> *, *Mainly
> > Black<
> https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=1i_JGJ_FqQldEnUq7cwjV8giYy
> > kz_tsGbTkC2EkAP3IM&hl=en&pli=1#> , *Obras
> > Públicas<
> https://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/halvard-johnson-obr
> > as-publicas> ; **The Perfection of Mozart's Third Eye and Other
> > Sonnets<
> http://www.scribd.com/doc/27039868/Halvard-Johnson-THE-PERFECTION-
> > OF-MOZART-S-THIRD-EYE-Other-Sonnets>
> > ; **Organ Harvest with Entrance of
> > Clones<
> http://www.amazon.com/Harvest-Entrance-Clones-Halvard-Johnson/dp/09
> > 65404390/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1283182804&sr=8-1>
> > ; **Tango
> > Bouquet<
> https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0ATDp6rzKkBkhZGZwand2cHdfOWc1Mn
> > h3Zw&hl=en> ; **Theory of
> > Harmony<
> https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.co
> > m/fall04/theory1.pdf> ; **Rapsodie
> > espagnole<https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace
> .
> > com/rapsodi.pdf> ; **Guide to the Tokyo
> > Subway<
> http://www.amazon.com/Guide-Tokyo-Subway-Other-Poems/dp/0971487316/
> > ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1283183153&sr=1-3> ; **The Sonnet
> > Project<
> https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.co
> > m/hsonnet.pdf> ; **G(e)nome
> > <http://xpressed.wippiespace.com/fall03/genome.pdf>; **Winter
> > Journey <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.winter.html>;
> > **Eclipse<http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.eclipse.html>
> > ; **The Dance of the Red Swan
> > <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.dance.html>;
> > *
> > *Transparencies & Projections
> > <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.transp.html>
> > *
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > On Mon, Nov 7, 2011 at 8:40 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
> > wrote:
> >
> >
> >> A church and a church
> >> pushing into the sky one in a marsh the smaller on massive rock such our
> >> ingenuity
> >>
> >> A chapel on a hill
> >> the church tower higher though the houses, on Barnoon, tiptoe, looking
> >> down into cold snuggles of light blanket sky
> >>
> >> The island’s bare still
> >> for whatever inhibition; sand is forced inflowing, hidden pneumatics,
> the
> >> noise of human interruption
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
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