I understand
I nearly said that what I had done is to rewrite your poem as mine
best
L
On Sun, October 2, 2011 14:43, Halvard Johnson wrote:
> No, I haven't ignored you, Laurence. I actually tried out both your
> version (in my head, anyway), and your suggestions work in a way, they
> just don't work out in the way I had (and have) in mind.
>
>
> Serving the tri-state area.
>
>
> Hal
>
>
> Halvard Johnson
> ================
>
>
> [log in to unmask] http://sites.google.com/site/halvardjohnson/Home
> http://entropyandme.blogspot.com
> http://imageswithoutwords.blogspot.com
> http://www.hamiltonstone.org
> <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/>
> http://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/home
> <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/>
> Remains To Be
> Seen<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tII1LvsGmJpmLby_dyie77p3D2u2sAwc
> JL3TuW5T-nY/edit?hl=en_US>
> *, Remains To Be Seen (Vol.
> II)<https://docs.google.com/document/d/198kwjOUuDuROG50BpMvKu_05auLcYh1Ce0
> 3rHqsSBNE/edit?hl=en_US>
> ,** Remains To Be Seen (Vol.
> III)<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JW0nJh3tEtKzCu4hya0mYSU04EA0sz6hR
> M90eTgzhyw/edit?hl=en_US>
> , *Sonnets from the Basque & Other
> Poems<https://docs.google.com/document/d/16pWoy7FBSWyCLWpz0hhI-i0BOYjSBeUi
> qfWBmJF3g64/edit?hl=en_US> *, *Mainly
> Black<https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=1i_JGJ_FqQldEnUq7cwjV8giYy
> kz_tsGbTkC2EkAP3IM&hl=en&pli=1#> , *Obras
> Públicas<https://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/halvard-johnson-obr
> as-publicas> ; **The Perfection of Mozart's Third Eye and Other
> Sonnets<http://www.scribd.com/doc/27039868/Halvard-Johnson-THE-PERFECTION-
> OF-MOZART-S-THIRD-EYE-Other-Sonnets>
> ; **Organ Harvest with Entrance of
> Clones<http://www.amazon.com/Harvest-Entrance-Clones-Halvard-Johnson/dp/09
> 65404390/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1283182804&sr=8-1>
> ; **Tango
> Bouquet<https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0ATDp6rzKkBkhZGZwand2cHdfOWc1Mn
> h3Zw&hl=en> ; **Theory of
> Harmony<https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.co
> m/fall04/theory1.pdf> ; **Rapsodie
> espagnole<https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.
> com/rapsodi.pdf> ; **Guide to the Tokyo
> Subway<http://www.amazon.com/Guide-Tokyo-Subway-Other-Poems/dp/0971487316/
> ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1283183153&sr=1-3> ; **The Sonnet
> Project<https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.co
> m/hsonnet.pdf> ; **G(e)nome
> <http://xpressed.wippiespace.com/fall03/genome.pdf>; **Winter
> Journey <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.winter.html>;
> **Eclipse<http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.eclipse.html>
> ; **The Dance of the Red Swan
> <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.dance.html>;
> *
> *Transparencies & Projections
> <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.transp.html>
> *
>
>
>
>
>
> On Sun, Oct 2, 2011 at 1:54 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
>
>> Both accepted
>>
>>
>> Just ignore me
>>
>>
>> L
>>
>>
>> On Sat, October 1, 2011 18:43, Halvard Johnson wrote:
>>
>>> Not to mention the rhythm.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Serving the tri-state area.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Hal
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Halvard Johnson
>>> ================
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> [log in to unmask] http://sites.google.com/site/halvardjohnson/Home
>>> http://entropyandme.blogspot.com
>>> http://imageswithoutwords.blogspot.com
>>> http://www.hamiltonstone.org
>>> <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/>
>>> http://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/home
>>> <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/>
>>> Remains To Be
>>> Seen<
>>>
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tII1LvsGmJpmLby_dyie77p3D2u2sAwc
>>
>>> JL3TuW5T-nY/edit?hl=en_US>
>>> *, Remains To Be Seen (Vol.
>>> II)<
>>>
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/198kwjOUuDuROG50BpMvKu_05auLcYh1Ce0
>>
>>> 3rHqsSBNE/edit?hl=en_US>
>>> ,** Remains To Be Seen (Vol.
>>> III)<
>>>
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JW0nJh3tEtKzCu4hya0mYSU04EA0sz6hR
>>
>>> M90eTgzhyw/edit?hl=en_US>
>>> , *Sonnets from the Basque & Other
>>> Poems<
>>>
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/16pWoy7FBSWyCLWpz0hhI-i0BOYjSBeUi
>>
>>> qfWBmJF3g64/edit?hl=en_US> *, *Mainly Black<
>>>
>> https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=1i_JGJ_FqQldEnUq7cwjV8giYy
>>
>>> kz_tsGbTkC2EkAP3IM&hl=en&pli=1#> , *Obras Públicas<
>>>
>> https://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/halvard-johnson-obr
>>
>>> as-publicas> ; **The Perfection of Mozart's Third Eye and Other
>>> Sonnets<
>>>
>> http://www.scribd.com/doc/27039868/Halvard-Johnson-THE-PERFECTION-
>>
>>> OF-MOZART-S-THIRD-EYE-Other-Sonnets>
>>> ; **Organ Harvest with Entrance of
>>> Clones<
>>>
>> http://www.amazon.com/Harvest-Entrance-Clones-Halvard-Johnson/dp/09
>>
>>> 65404390/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1283182804&sr=8-1>
>>> ; **Tango
>>> Bouquet<
>>>
>> https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0ATDp6rzKkBkhZGZwand2cHdfOWc1Mn
>>
>>> h3Zw&hl=en> ; **Theory of Harmony<
>>>
>> https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.co
>>
>>> m/fall04/theory1.pdf> ; **Rapsodie
>>> espagnole<https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiesp
>>> ace
>> .
>>
>>> com/rapsodi.pdf> ; **Guide to the Tokyo Subway<
>>>
>> http://www.amazon.com/Guide-Tokyo-Subway-Other-Poems/dp/0971487316/
>>
>>> ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1283183153&sr=1-3> ; **The Sonnet
>>> Project<
>>>
>> https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.co
>>
>>> m/hsonnet.pdf> ; **G(e)nome
>>> <http://xpressed.wippiespace.com/fall03/genome.pdf>; **Winter
>>> Journey <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.winter.html>;
>>> **Eclipse<http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.eclipse.html>
>>> ; **The Dance of the Red Swan
>>> <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.dance.html>;
>>> *
>>> *Transparencies & Projections
>>> <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.transp.html>
>>> *
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On Sat, Oct 1, 2011 at 12:13 PM, Halvard Johnson <[log in to unmask]>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>> You'd spoil my rhyme scheme.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Serving the tri-state area.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Hal
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Halvard Johnson
>>>> ================
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> [log in to unmask] http://sites.google.com/site/halvardjohnson/Home
>>>> http://entropyandme.blogspot.com
>>>> http://imageswithoutwords.blogspot.com
>>>> http://www.hamiltonstone.org
>>>> <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/>
>>>> http://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/home
>>>> <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/>
>>>> Remains To Be
>>>> Seen<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tII1LvsGmJpmLby_dyie77p3D2u
>>>> 2sA
>>>> wcJL3TuW5T-nY/edit?hl=en_US> *, Remains To Be Seen (Vol.
>>>> II)<https://docs.google.com/document/d/198kwjOUuDuROG50BpMvKu_05auL
>>>> cYh1 Ce03rHqsSBNE/edit?hl=en_US>
>>>> ,** Remains To Be Seen (Vol.
>>>> III)<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JW0nJh3tEtKzCu4hya0mYSU04EA
>>>> 0sz
>>>> 6hRM90eTgzhyw/edit?hl=en_US>
>>>> , *Sonnets from the Basque & Other
>>>> Poems<https://docs.google.com/document/d/16pWoy7FBSWyCLWpz0hhI-i0BOY
>>>> jSB eUiqfWBmJF3g64/edit?hl=en_US> *, *Mainly
>>>> Black<https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=1i_JGJ_FqQldEnUq7cwj
>>>> V8gi
>>>> Yykz_tsGbTkC2EkAP3IM&hl=en&pli=1#>
>>>> , *Obras
>>>> Públicas<https://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/halvard-john
>>>> son-o bras-publicas> ; **The Perfection of Mozart's Third Eye and
>>>> Other
>>>> Sonnets<http://www.scribd.com/doc/27039868/Halvard-Johnson-THE-PERFE
>>>> CTI
>>>> ON-OF-MOZART-S-THIRD-EYE-Other-Sonnets>
>>>> ; **Organ Harvest with Entrance of
>>>> Clones<http://www.amazon.com/Harvest-Entrance-Clones-Halvard-Johnson
>>>> /dp
>>>> /0965404390/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1283182804&sr=8-1>
>>>> ; **Tango
>>>> Bouquet<https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0ATDp6rzKkBkhZGZwand2cHdfO
>>>> Wc1
>>>> Mnh3Zw&hl=en>
>>>> ; **Theory of
>>>> Harmony<https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespa
>>>> ce. com/fall04/theory1.pdf> ; **Rapsodie
>>>> espagnole<https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippie
>>>> spac e.com/rapsodi.pdf> ; **Guide to the Tokyo
>>>> Subway<http://www.amazon.com/Guide-Tokyo-Subway-Other-Poems/dp/0971
>>>> 4873
>>>> 16/ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1283183153&sr=1-3>
>>>> ; **The Sonnet
>>>> Project<https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespa
>>>> ce. com/hsonnet.pdf> ; **G(e)nome
>>>> <http://xpressed.wippiespace.com/fall03/genome.pdf>; **Winter
>>>> Journey <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.winter.html>;
>>>> **Eclipse<http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.eclipse.html>
>>>> ; **The Dance of the Red
>>>> Swan<http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.dance.html>
>>>> ;*
>>>> *Transparencies &
>>>> Projections<http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.transp.html>
>>>> *
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On Sat, Oct 1, 2011 at 12:00 PM, Lawrence Upton
>>>> <[log in to unmask]>wrote:
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> tell me to -- no don't, but what about dropping _in the day_ and
>>>>> _their
>>>>> way_?
>>>>>
>>>>> L
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On Sat, October 1, 2011 17:24, Halvard Johnson wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> Morgenspaziergang
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Flowers at play, so early in the day. Arrested
>>>>>> integrities passing their way.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Serving the tri-state area.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Hal
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Halvard Johnson
>>>>>> ================
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> [log in to unmask]
>>>>>> http://sites.google.com/site/halvardjohnson/Home
>>>>>> http://entropyandme.blogspot.com
>>>>>> http://imageswithoutwords.blogspot.com
>>>>>> http://www.hamiltonstone.org
>>>>>> <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/>
>>>>>> http://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/home
>>>>>> <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/>
>>>>>> Remains To Be
>>>>>> Seen<
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tII1LvsGmJpmLby_dyie77p3D2u2s
>>>>> Awc
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> JL3TuW5T-nY/edit?hl=en_US>
>>>>>> *, Remains To Be Seen (Vol.
>>>>>> II)<
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/198kwjOUuDuROG50BpMvKu_05auLcY
>>>>> h1Ce 0
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> 3rHqsSBNE/edit?hl=en_US>
>>>>>> ,** Remains To Be Seen (Vol.
>>>>>> III)<
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JW0nJh3tEtKzCu4hya0mYSU04EA0s
>>>>> z6hR
>>>>>
>>>>>> M90eTgzhyw/edit?hl=en_US>
>>>>>> , *Sonnets from the Basque & Other
>>>>>> Poems<
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/16pWoy7FBSWyCLWpz0hhI-i0BOYjSB
>>>>> eUi
>>>>>
>>>>>> qfWBmJF3g64/edit?hl=en_US> *, *Mainly Black<
>>>>>>
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=1i_JGJ_FqQldEnUq7cwjV8gi
>>>>> Yy
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> kz_tsGbTkC2EkAP3IM&hl=en&pli=1#> , *Obras Públicas<
>>>>>>
>>>>> https://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/halvard-johnson-obr
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> as-publicas> ; **The Perfection of Mozart's Third Eye and Other
>>>>>> Sonnets<
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>> http://www.scribd.com/doc/27039868/Halvard-Johnson-THE-PERFECTION
>>>>> -
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> OF-MOZART-S-THIRD-EYE-Other-Sonnets>
>>>>>> ; **Organ Harvest with Entrance of
>>>>>> Clones<
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>> http://www.amazon.com/Harvest-Entrance-Clones-Halvard-Johnson/dp/
>>>>> 09
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> 65404390/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1283182804&sr=8-1>
>>>>>> ; **Tango
>>>>>> Bouquet<
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0ATDp6rzKkBkhZGZwand2cHdfOWc1Mn
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> h3Zw&hl=en> ; **Theory of Harmony<
>>>>>>
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.co
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> m/fall04/theory1.pdf> ; **Rapsodie espagnole<
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> com/rapsodi.pdf> ; **Guide to the Tokyo Subway<
>>>>>>
>>>>> http://www.amazon.com/Guide-Tokyo-Subway-Other-Poems/dp/097148731
>>>>> 6/
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1283183153&sr=1-3> ; **The
>>>>>> Sonnet
>>>>>> Project<
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.co
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> m/hsonnet.pdf> ; **G(e)nome
>>>>>> <http://xpressed.wippiespace.com/fall03/genome.pdf>; **Winter
>>>>>> Journey <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.winter.html>;
>>>>>> **Eclipse<http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.eclipse.html>
>>>>>> ; **The Dance of the Red Swan
>>>>>> <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.dance.html>;
>>>>>> *
>>>>>> *Transparencies & Projections
>>>>>> <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.transp.html>
>>>>>> *
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> -----
>>>>> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
>>>>> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
>>>>> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
>>>>> wfuk.org.uk/blog ---- Lawrence Upton
>>>>> Dept of Music
>>>>> Goldsmiths, University of London
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>
>>
>> -----
>> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
>> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
>> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
>> wfuk.org.uk/blog ----
>> Lawrence Upton
>> Dept of Music
>> Goldsmiths, University of London
>>
>>
>
-----
UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
wfuk.org.uk/blog
----
Lawrence Upton
Dept of Music
Goldsmiths, University of London
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