Yes, a number of us read them all, I'm guessing, without comment. They are
often complete in themselves but also enhanced by their relationship with
each other - a wave building up. I'm looking forward to the entire
manuscript!
Keep writing, Lawrence, keep writing without hope and without design. It
will all happen mysteriously as all great poetry does.
Andrew the Innocent
On 27 September 2011 06:32, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> I read them all, Lawrence, but dont always have much to say beyond that (as
> with the next little one),
>
> but I like the 'looking down' here...
>
> Doug
> On 2011-09-25, at 3:47 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
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> > Looking down into heaped chaotic sky.
> > Tumbled clothing of watery cloud overcast,
> > showing much strong white. A small fishing boat
> > slowly disturbs the tranquilised bay,
> > followed by gulls flying themselves wave height
> >
>
> Douglas Barbour
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> Why poetry? And why not, I asked,
> my right brain humming sedition.
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