Dear P
> L lovely Has a feel of a setting notes for making a film -for me first
> one worked better
in what way?
> -would have liked to link more if diptych(I spelt it!)
if....?
> Both walls stone ? same wall? Although beach in second is wet?
It's not an architect's report, dear boy
L
> Enough ramblings from me -much sun on head today-
> P-sunned
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> Sent: 01 September 2011 09:13
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> Subject: Landscape diptych
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> dry-stone wall and cat
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> mist has the bay one-sided
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> dry beach heard ocean
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> unfinished wall with tipped up cat wobbling
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> mist holds the one side bay
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> birds' howl
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> ocean heard
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> wet sand, bricks
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> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
> wfuk.org.uk/blog ----
> Lawrence Upton
> Dept of Music
> Goldsmiths, University of London
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UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
wfuk.org.uk/blog
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Lawrence Upton
Dept of Music
Goldsmiths, University of London
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