L lovely Has a feel of a setting notes for making a film -for me first one
worked better -would have liked to link more if diptych(I spelt it!)
Both walls stone ? same wall? Although beach in second is wet?
Enough ramblings from me -much sun on head today-
P-sunned
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Subject: Landscape diptych
dry-stone wall
and cat
mist has the bay one-sided
dry beach
heard ocean
unfinished wall with tipped up cat wobbling
mist holds the one side bay
birds' howl
ocean heard
wet sand, bricks
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UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
wfuk.org.uk/blog
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Lawrence Upton
Dept of Music
Goldsmiths, University of London
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