if i take those final 2 words in each stanza as played in quotes ironically then it's not so flat, Patrick. but i tend to agree with Bob that being too obviously 'political' can lead to readings that simply won't agree or enjoy…
On 2011-09-14, at 1:48 AM, Patrick McManus wrote:
> Arab spring
> Arab youth
> Arab uprisings
> British spring
> British youth
> British uprisings
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Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
People say they have to express their emotions.
I'm sick of that. Photography doesn't teach
you to express your emotions;
it teaches you how to see.