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On 19 August 2011 23:02, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Hi Doug
>
> and thank you once again
>
> I think I may just throw the whole bushel out with you liking this stuff -
> i'll keep posting
>
> not much to say on this but
>
> the last line is set as one (showing my age! who talks of setting a line
> now) but, yes, it almost makes it to three... 2 and a half
>
>
> On Fri, August 19, 2011 15:42, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> > Nice, Lawrence. This is how I ot it; is the last line supposed to be
> > three?
> >
> > Like the allusion to Spicer there... that fits nevertheless into that
> > space named so...
> >
> >
> > Doug
> >
> >
> > On 2011-08-19, at 4:08 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> >
> >
> >> buried in air voice calloused hope out of range
> >>
> >> confined alert stone depth deadening beneath our feet
> >>
> >> bad acoustic and abandoned manned machine
> >>
> >> to be is to work brain's the engine housing echoes
> >>
> >> the skull is deaf connects the neck bone. execute.
> >>
> >> information loops the highway with emptiness
> >>
> >> a noose choking the nous with clattering readback
> >>
> >> buried in air, just the head knows aether
> >>
> >
> > Douglas Barbour
> > [log in to unmask]
> >
> > http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
> > http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
> >
> >
> > Latest books:
> > Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
> > http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
> > Wednesdays'
> >
> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10
> > .html
> >
> >
> > It is natural to speak of your own weaknesses so winsomely they will seem
> > strengths, as if everyone else is inadequate if they do not have your
> > inadequacies.
> >
> > William H. Gass
> >
> >
>
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> Goldsmiths, University of London
>
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