The use of consonants, esp b (and f) is fascinating. The b a bit of a
low rumble.
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On 13/07/2011, at 8:29 PM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> unable to speak
> you’re doing this rich voice
> light like brambles
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> branching
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> silvers
> each surrounding branch
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> breaks up
> to deep shadow
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> breathless atmosphere
> shall take some telling
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> foolish looking
> *and revealing
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> flame behind skin
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> Lawrence Upton
> July 2011
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> solo poems
> http://www.landscapeandlanguagecentre.au.com/current_journal.html
> http://www.landscapeandlanguagecentre.au.com/Peripatetica/Peripatetica_Upton_Try%20Valley.pdf
> http://www.landscapeandlanguagecentre.au.com/Peripatetica/Peripatetica_Upton_Walking.pdf
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> collaborative visual work:-
> http://www.poetrybeyondtext.org/upton-begbie.html
> http://www.poetrybeyondtext.org/begbie-upton.html
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> Lawrence Upton
> AHRC Creative Research Fellow
> Dept of Music
> Goldsmiths, University of London
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