Max,
Your rhymes in this work continue to intrigue me, perhaps in part because there does not appear to be an overall pattern, no matter how numerous they may be.
I like the manner in which the title and first line form a couplet via the end rhyme, partly isolating the second line as a syntactical unit unto itself, and making it the most resonant line for me. It sums up in a manner I've never articulated that precisely an experience I've had on numerous occasions, even though I generally enjoy shopping.
Barry
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