Me too, I like it with its twists and pools of thought/reaction. Swing away
with Double J!
Andrew
On 14 July 2011 04:13, Stephen Vincent <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Yes, Jill, this is dark and then some.
> Time for a cleansing shower, methinks.
> But so full of good lines & twists:
>
> three towns from seeking
> >
> > and down to cavelight
>
> Stephen V
>
> --- On Wed, 7/13/11, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> From: Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> Subject: Re: Snap - troubled, sure
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Date: Wednesday, July 13, 2011, 10:56 AM
>
> This is fresh and troubling both, Jill, and I like it very much. Sheila
>
> On Wed, Jul 13, 2011 at 12:18 AM, [log in to unmask]
> <[log in to unmask]>wrote:
>
> > TROUBLED, SURE
> >
> > of what time will show you
> > about the sky
> >
> > for the plan to blow away
> > You played for more
> >
> > fleet from the city
> > three towns from seeking
> >
> > and down to cavelight
> > when the dark has grown
> >
> > lost with everything flown
> > When the bird has drowned
> >
> > told to ruin, earth sinks to
> > who can know so much
> >
> > updated life
> >
> >
> >
> > Jill in Adelaide
> >
> > ________________________
> > Jill Jones
> >
> > www.jilljones.com.au
> >
>
--
Andrew
http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
'Mother Waits for Father Late' republished available at
http://www.picaropress.com/
http://www.qlrs.com/poem.asp?id=766
http://frankshome.org/AndrewBurke.html
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