On 3/7/2011 2:03 AM, Chris Jones wrote:
> On Sun, 2011-03-06 at 16:15 -0500, Bob Grumman wrote:
>> A long stare smelled its way
> Bob, can I suggest present, rather then past tense?
>
> best, cj
Thanks, Chris. Good thought. I've done a lot of these Poem poems and
gotten into the habit of using past tense--without thinking about it.
Now I'll think about it. I think you're right about this one. Maybe
others should be present tense, as well. . . .
--Bob
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