I think you did, Barry, looking again: that's a good line break to me...
Doug
On 2011-03-10, at 9:45 AM, Barry Alpert wrote:
> Thanks, Doug. On this occasion, I didn't feel I was forcing any lines in order to get to 14, though I was a bit uncertain whether I had broken line 13 on the most appropriate word.
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