I like the way 'This observer' is implicit before mentioned, & works a particular tone (which is somewhat undermined by the one line,
His voice growls in erotic lust.
I think it's the redundancy of 'erotic' there....
Doug
On 2011-02-11, at 6:02 AM, Maud Starpey wrote:
> This observer
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