I like it too, Sharon - such balance.
Andrew
On 5 January 2011 07:47, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> I like it too, Sharon; the distance through that p(l)ane of glass; the
> containment of the lines...
>
> Doug
>
> On 4-Jan-11, at 2:40 PM, Randolph Healy wrote:
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> Hi Sharon,
>>
>> brutal, beautiful. Having read this through, for some reason I started
>> reading the stanzas in different sequences. Haven't found any sequence that
>> doesn't work. Scattered feathers indeed. Wonderfully resonant.
>>
>> Randolph
>>
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> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
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