Yes.
Although I felt a few line breaks didnt quite work.
An interesting finale, fred. but maybe all that's needed it the
blessing of the plastic god....
Doug
On 27-Sep-10, at 2:32 AM, Max Richards wrote:
> I have only now caught up with this, Fred.
>
> I hope others will read, enjoy and respond.
>
> Mrs Carrasco strikes me as huge, ie, the poem takes the bad-enough
> monstrous
> confusions of the newspaper report's Mrs C and seems to me to
> develop her
> and her environment with great satirical energy.
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