Particularly admire the sound/visual unit "sheer sere", which I don't recall ever encountering previously. Assume it's intended to stand alone syntactically, though occasionally I want to connect it to the line which follows.
Barry
On Wed, 22 Sep 2010 15:48:40 -0600, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>leaves on the street to
>pedal through yellow sheer sere
>sun lower in sky
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>22 IX 10
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