Abuses & blueses with the Muses!
Sorry, Hal, to see you go through all that.
Not to make light or your situation, but
Time to bring that one the sweetest of chocolates
or a rope!
Stephen Vincent
http://stephenvincent.net/blog/
--- On Fri, 8/20/10, Halvard Johnson <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
From: Halvard Johnson <[log in to unmask]>
Subject: Critique
To: [log in to unmask]
Date: Friday, August 20, 2010, 12:41 PM
Critique
I was swept into a surrealistic work
by some jack-of-all-trades, a macabre
collage of spontaneous gestures anchored
in explosive words like “POW,” “CRUNCH,”
“KABOOM.” Youthful pizzazz, often found
lacking in his later works, given free rein.
More perfect marriage, something to be sought
after years of imperfection. Swirls of paint,
some sort of wicked improvisation.
Notions of progress, our most imperfect product,
little sense of light, of dark.
Pieces more mischievous than accusatory
scampered up and down the keyboard, until,
in the privacy of her bathroom, she found
vicious punch lines in my most casual remarks.
Hal Serving the tri-state area.
Halvard Johnson
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<http://www.hamiltonstone.org>*The Perfection of Mozart's Third Eye and
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