Thanks for liking it, Doug. what's cut out are the frames between the
two e's. Not much, but enough to fit the so-called "correct"
definition--if the poem were printed on a strip of film rather than on
a, uh, screen. I wouldn't seriously call it a jump-cut, just thought it
amusing that, strictly speaking, it fits the definition.
For those who might say "sleep" is a word, not an action, I'd add that
the spelling of that word is the action carried out.
--Bob
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