I like them, generally, Stephen, the last one as games?
But I was bothered by the repetition here:
Built in some small city
Some call "failure":
especially with such a weak word as 'some'.
Doug
On 16-Mar-10, at 3:23 PM, Stephen Vincent wrote:
>
> these are from an on-going series - last week, too - tentatively
> titled "Darklight" .
Douglas Barbour
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tokens.
Charles Olson
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