I agree with Brian about that last couplet, but wonder if the previous
one is necessary. Getting into the head of the dog doesnt seem to be
what the rest of the poem is doing...
On 2-Feb-10, at 4:17 PM, Max Richards wrote:
> The Leash
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Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
Swept snow, Li Po,
by dawn's 40-watt moon
to the road that hies to office
away from home.