:-)
> luncheon under flowering dogwood
> white linen tablecloth
> white bowls fill
> white petals salad
> white wine plentiful
> white thighs...................
:-)
-----Original Message-----
From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of David Bircumshaw
Sent: 10 February 2010 22:48
To: [log in to unmask]
Subject: Re: Snap (this time)
Patrick
You spil
t a bit
On 10 February 2010 22:28, Patrick McManus
<[log in to unmask]>wrote:
> luncheon under flowering dogwood
> white linen tablecloth
> white bowls fill
> white petals salad
> white wine plentiful
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Judy Prince
> Sent: 10 February 2010 21:05
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: Snap (this time)
>
> Me old eyes missing a bit o' the text....!
>
> Re chinoiserie and I think japanoiserie, the same averseness for "the" and
> "a" and "he" and "she" [a general ungendered personal pronoun instead, in
> Chinese]. I feel an imitation coming on:
>
>
> Joodles Aping An Asian Makar's Poem
>
> luncheon under flowering dogwood
> white linen tablecloth
> white bowls fill
> white petals salad
>
> -------------------
>
> jbp
>
> On 10 February 2010 12:29, David Bircumshaw <[log in to unmask]
> >wrote:
>
> > Sorry Judy, I meant in the text of the e-mail, as in : ('ve revised ...
> >
> > (looking at chinoiserie is making this writer first person averse a
> verse,
> > m'kingdom for the worse)
> >
> > On 10 February 2010 20:22, Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]>
> > wrote:
> >
> > > If you wish, Dave, please post one of those earlier versions showing
> your
> > > wrestling down the irritant first person; otherwise, I can't imagine
it
> > > well
> > > enuff.
> > >
> > > joods
> > >
> > > On 10 February 2010 12:02, David Bircumshaw <[log in to unmask]
> > > >wrote:
> > >
> > > > Ta, joodles ('ve revised it three times already y'know - do you like
> my
> > > > (eek) just solution to the irritant first person?)
> > > >
> > > > On 10 February 2010 16:32, Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]
> >
> > > > wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > Yeah, love it!
> > > > >
> > > > > joodles
> > > > >
> > > > > On 10 February 2010 02:08, David Bircumshaw <
> > [log in to unmask]
> > > > > >wrote:
> > > > >
> > > > > > *For now, as it tries to get in*
> > > > > > **
> > > > > >
> > > > > > A squall of snow stopped, frustrated
> > > > > > on your stilled liquid : pane
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > --
> > > > > > David Bircumshaw
> > > > > > "A window./Big enough to hold screams/
> > > > > > You say are poems" - DMeltzer
> > > > > > Website and A Chide's Alphabet
> > > > > > http://www.staplednapkin.org.uk
> > > > > > The Animal Subsides
> > > http://www.arrowheadpress.co.uk/books/animal.html
> > > > > > Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/david.bircumshaw
> > > > > > twitter: http://twitter.com/bucketshave
> > > > > > blog: http://groggydays.blogspot.com/
> > > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > --
> > > > > Frisky Moll Press: http://judithprince.com/home.html
> > > > >
> > > > > "I can't read my library card." ---Jeff Hecker, Norfolk, VA
> > > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > --
> > > > David Bircumshaw
> > > > "A window./Big enough to hold screams/
> > > > You say are poems" - DMeltzer
> > > > Website and A Chide's Alphabet
> > > > http://www.staplednapkin.org.uk
> > > > The Animal Subsides
> http://www.arrowheadpress.co.uk/books/animal.html
> > > > Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/david.bircumshaw
> > > > twitter: http://twitter.com/bucketshave
> > > > blog: http://groggydays.blogspot.com/
> > > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > --
> > > Frisky Moll Press: http://judithprince.com/home.html
> > >
> > > "I can't read my library card." ---Jeff Hecker, Norfolk, VA
> > >
> >
> >
> >
> > --
> > David Bircumshaw
> > "A window./Big enough to hold screams/
> > You say are poems" - DMeltzer
> > Website and A Chide's Alphabet
> > http://www.staplednapkin.org.uk
> > The Animal Subsides http://www.arrowheadpress.co.uk/books/animal.html
> > Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/david.bircumshaw
> > twitter: http://twitter.com/bucketshave
> > blog: http://groggydays.blogspot.com/
> >
>
>
>
> --
> Frisky Moll Press: http://judithprince.com/home.html
>
> "I can't read my library card." ---Jeff Hecker, Norfolk, VA
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--
David Bircumshaw
"A window./Big enough to hold screams/
You say are poems" - DMeltzer
Website and A Chide's Alphabet
http://www.staplednapkin.org.uk
The Animal Subsides http://www.arrowheadpress.co.uk/books/animal.html
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/david.bircumshaw
twitter: http://twitter.com/bucketshave
blog: http://groggydays.blogspot.com/
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