Max
I agree with Brian about that last couplet, but wonder if the previous
one is necessary. Getting into the head of the dog doesnt seem to be
what the rest of the poem is doing...
Doug
On 2-Feb-10, at 4:17 PM, Max Richards wrote:
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> The Leash
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