You may be write. Or maybe more oblique title.
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From: "Chris Jones" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Wednesday, February 10, 2010 4:15 AM
Subject: Re: poems
> On Tue, 2010-02-09 at 20:56 -0500, Frederick Pollack wrote:
>> Note to Self
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> Frederick, not convinced that the, Note to Self, title works.
>
> Removing it and rewriting the following lines so they are more tight and
> not so dependant on the title, is one way I can suggest.
>
> As always, your decision, best Chris Jones.
>
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