I guess the still lifes would set some of this off; you are looking
for an argument between the photos & text, Chris? I assume you
definitely want the judder of syntax, but I think there could be some
judicious edits, like you dont need 'guns' just say 'pistols'. things
like that. It wills itself to a kind of narrative even as line by line
it seems to deny it, I think?
Doug
On 15-Feb-10, at 2:05 AM, Chris Jones wrote:
> The Bar-B-Q: part two
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