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Re: Response to my criticisms of Armitage's poetry

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"Hampson, R" <[log in to unmask]>

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British & Irish poets <[log in to unmask]>

Date:

Mon, 22 Feb 2010 10:57:46 -0000

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One example of this would be the Republicans' use of Springsteen's Born in the USA as a celebratory anthem.



Have we lost the idea of a misreading?





Robert





-----Original Message-----

From: British & Irish poets [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Jeffrey Side

Sent: 20 February 2010 20:42

To: [log in to unmask]

Subject: Re: Response to my criticisms of Armitage's poetry



I posted a response to this but it hasn't appeared yet, for some reason. 

The gist of it was that I agree texts have no single meaning but many, 

and that each reader can favour one of these meanings for themselves 

depending on their mood or emotional state when reading the text. 

Most people do this with songs anyway so I don't see it as being all 

that outlandish an idea to apply to poetry.







On Sat, 20 Feb 2010 13:04:23 +0000, Sean Bonney 

<[log in to unmask]> wrote:



>Jeff /// maybe your "free associative" theories of reading would be 

more fruitfully applied to texts and poems that have a more fixed 

surface meaning. you know, a form of reading that went against the 

grain of what the text is trying to say and so on. of course, there's a 

long tradition of this: maybe a reading of Walter Benjamin's "Origin of 

German Tragic Drama" would be helpful to you.

>

>as it is, for you, "free association" doesn't seem to be anything more 

than an abdication of the complexities of reading. even the most 

abstract of texts has 'meanings', entire constellations of them.

>

>Sean

>

>http://abandonedbuildings.blogspot.com/

>

>--- On Sat, 20/2/10, Jamie McKendrick 

<[log in to unmask]> wrote:

>

>From: Jamie McKendrick <[log in to unmask]>

>Subject: Re: Response to my criticisms of Armitage's poetry

>To: [log in to unmask]

>Date: Saturday, 20 February, 2010, 1:36

>

>Jeff,

> Sorry - I should have read through my last post before sending it: 

2nd line "other" should read "others" and later

>"a poem, any poem, sets up associations that have to restricted" 

should read "sets up associations that have to be restricted" (adjusted 

below).

>A case where what you call the "grammatically syntactical" would 

definitely have helped!

>Jamie

>

>----- Original Message ----- From: "Jamie Mckendrick" 

<[log in to unmask]>

>To: <[log in to unmask]>

>Sent: Friday, February 19, 2010 8:40 PM

>Subject: Re: Response to my criticisms of Armitage's poetry

>

>

>Jeff,

> Your sweeping veto on narrative elements in poems leaves behind 

you a

>pretty scorched and impoverished terrain, as others have noticed - but 

I'm just

>as worried by your defence of free-association:

>“I think most people free-associate at some point when reading 

poetry. I

>always thought this was the point of poetic language—to allow for 

this.

>Poetry that precludes such an act, in my view, is not poetry.”

>  It’s hard to deny that “most people free-associate at some 

point when

>reading poetry”, though I’d argue that at the point they do so 

they’ve already

>stopped reading it. No kind of poetry can quite “preclude” the 

activity: I can

>free-associate in the bath, on the bus, or watching a tv programme,

>particularly if it doesn’t interest me much. I've no need of poetry 

for this

>purpose, so I don’t see free-association as “the point of poetic 

language”. It

>goes without saying that the experiences, memories and knowledge 

that

>people bring to a poem are crucial in understanding it, but I think a 

poem, any

>poem, sets up associations that have to be restricted (including those 

that might

>not have been intended, but that are still operative). Certain poems 

are more

>and others less restrictive in their associations, but this isn’t a 

necessary

>indicator of their quality.

>   In the Jacket article, presumably as a corrective to 

Armitage’s ‘Night Shift’

>you offer one of your own compositions:

>

>I a egg

>I a waffle

>I broken

>the better to live

>

>followed by a commentary which deserves to be quoted in full:

>"For example, if we look at the words ‘egg’, ‘waffle’, 

‘broken’ and ‘better to live’

>it is possible to free-associate from each one. From ‘egg’, we 

can get

>to “delicate”, or “clever” (as in “egg-head”) or 

“baby” (as

>in “chicklet”). ‘Waffle’ has another meaning apart from a 

food; it also

>means: “Pause or hold back in uncertainty or unwillingness”. 

‘Broken’ can

>mean, “broken physically” or “broken emotionally”, the 

word can also

>mean: “interrupt”. ‘Better to live’ can mean “able to 

live”, “more fit to live”

>or “more worthy of life”. My interpretation of these lines is: 

“I am an unborn

>baby (egg). I sense my mother’s uncertainty about having me 

(waffle). I hope

>she does not abort me (broken). I am worthy of life (better to live).

>Consequently, from a set of ungrammatical phrases it is possible to 

confer a

>depth of meaning. Such interpretations as given in the above two 

examples

>would be difficult with lines that were grammatically syntactical."

>

>Both verse and commentary leave me in even deeper doubt about the 

virtues

>of free-association and made me turn back with relief to Armitage. 

I’d also like

>to think you were “having a laugh”, but I fear you weren’t.

>Jamie

>

>On Fri, 19 Feb 2010 11:14:29 +0000, Sean Bonney

><[log in to unmask]> wrote:

>

>> Jeff, you're having a laugh, right? otherwise, Mayakovsky's "An 

Extraordinary

>Adventure" isn't a poem, or Frank O'Hara's "The Day Lady Died", or 

about a

>million others.

>> what about long stories? or is "Paradise Lost" not a poem either?

>> 

>> http://abandonedbuildings.blogspot.com/

>> 

>> --- On Thu, 18/2/10, Jeffrey Side <[log in to unmask]> wrote:

>> 

>> The only rule I have is that a poem should not be a short story, or

>> vignette. Everything else is allowed.

>> 

>> You systematically favour the kind of vagueness or indeterminacy 

you

>> find in various song lyrics and a particular kind of poetry, perhaps

>> because it allows you to happily free-associate.

>> 

>> I think most people free-associate at some point when reading 

poetry. I

>> always thought this was the point of poetic language—to 

allow for this.

>> Poetry that precludes such an act, in my view, is not poetry.

>> 

>

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