Nice concept.
I read 'trickle up' as an opposition to 'trickle-down'
The middle lines are vague... 'the thought / humanity / So, absurd'
*What* thought?
*What* is absurd?
Is 'humanity' being addressed or described?
Janet
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> The Vision
> A rainbow swastika
> the thought
> humanity
> So, absurd
> How do we make IT trickle up
> and give the symbols back
> their true meaning.
>
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