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POETRYETC November 2009

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Re: Amy De'Ath poem at The Argotist Online

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Jeffrey Side <[log in to unmask]>

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Poetryetc: poetry and poetics

Date:

Thu, 5 Nov 2009 12:50:58 +0000

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Desmond, I've never tried writing through a poem. It may help my 
writers block. 

Kasper, yes, I've always thought that nothing in poetry can be totally 
nonsense, or meaningless as i prefer to call it. The mind does indeed 
shape the text into meanings relevant to the reader. The only measure 
of a good poem to me is how well a poem does this. The only "text" I 
can't do this with is 'Stawberry Fields Forever'. 





On Thu, 5 Nov 2009 11:19:04 +0200, kasper salonen 
<[log in to unmask]> wrote:

>haha, pretty awesome. nonsense at its most poetic, and really 
nothing is
>absolute nonsense in poetry because the mind shapes it in spite of 
itself.
>
>KS
>
>2009/11/5 Desmond Swords <[log in to unmask]>
>
>> This Is But Our Quota (Part V)
>>
>> 'I' am the back-arched
>> leading a little from the lip,
>>
>> a scenario arrived at via the possible
>> scenarios arrived at, in cartoon bubbles,
>>
>>
>> blaked warm lines strapped in bulbs
>> here and there, not hard to sell, or win
>>
>> proclaim from the frozen backside; angels
>>
>> still in situ, about to sail, either shoulder
>> ebbing with ill-informed cartoon bulbs,
>>
>> or bubbling within against my own bones.
>>
>>
>> This Is But Our Quota (Part IV)
>>
>> ill-informed, but at least formal in dress,
>> on the day a June dress getting longer
>>
>> and longer and nothing imminently there
>> harmful or prescient, sugar too another
>>
>> multitude of aphoristic flex, stretched
>> in order to get the palimpsest dose
>>
>> of in Roman aphorisms with hues of romance
>> awash in the poem dark anger, trying to get
>>
>> participants some all-wear out of the p’s I
>> donned within when poor little criminals,
>>
>> lyrically able, at the bottom of our Xmas card
>> list on the precipice this nomenclature
>>
>> sitting here (in front of you) the prophetic
>> neckline island tying not to notice, but a tune
>>
>> around a simple houseplant pointing finger
>> glove box far down her blouse, you are aphids
>>
>> descent-seat none appreciate but the scop
>> down song off her shoulder, totally, totally
>>
>> you obverse thin walk, long drive objective
>> to write our name on your behalf,  correspond
>>
>> dispel an unkind rumour of who isn’t in, or out
>> to romance ther spirited beast, wild within
>>
>> where you need to go to join the required dots
>> laboriously put together, assembled you are 'I'
>>
>> inversional ooking through the wrong colour
>> in a right way, packing cheeky smiles in eyes
>>
>> your l is all on the wing of flight for, far out
>> they’re your jewels, they’re where I left them
>>
>> there.
>>
>> Thanks very much, a great piece for making Write-Through with; 
which is a
>> superior-flarf which avant-gardists would say:
>>
>> 'Hey, cool, that's free exchange, done because of a deep 
professional love
>> for language in all its guises, straight or non-main, MS and NMS, 
both out
>> tribes tied by one bore - you who is 'I'.
>>

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