I liked it but to me it seems unfinished. She is left stranded in narrative
no-land. Write more of it, Fred, toss time around like a salad. ( Will Tonto
appear at the end? >g<)
Andrew
2009/10/12 Frederick Pollack <[log in to unmask]>
> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Ken Wolman" <[log in to unmask]>
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> Subject: Re: "*Leyenda"
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> Gorgeous.
>>
>> Was the Medieval feeling intentional because by the end it morphs into
>> something much more contemporary.
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>> Back to grading.
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>> Ken
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> Glad you liked it. "The future is the past coming." - Santayana
>
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Andrew
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