Try reading it standing up with your eyes closed.
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On Sep 2, 2009, at 3:10 PM, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> to me this feels like it's standing on one leg without some music
> +vocals to
> go with it. do you primarily write song lyrics?
> these verses feel pretty banal to me, even heavy-handed; they don't
> really
> say anything substantial because they're so generalised, or hackneyed
> really. to make these sentiments subtle would be to make it poetry.
>
> 2009/9/1 Angel Marquez <[log in to unmask]>
>
>> You're always sayingYou're with some other guy
>>
>> You're always playing
>> On, the other side
>>
>> It makes me crazy
>> It drives me insane
>>
>> but
>>
>> I know you know it makes it right
>> I know you know it makes it right
>>
>> You're always faking
>> Everybody out
>>
>> You're always taking
>> The most dangerous route
>>
>> It keeps me in line
>> It puts me in check
>>
>> but
>>
>> I know you know it makes it right
>> I know you know it just aint right
>>
>> You make me so high
>> You make me so high
>>
>> You're always twisting
>> The truth, inside out
>>
>> You're always breaking
>> More than all the rules
>>
>> You think you're so cool
>> It drives me wild
>>
>> but
>>
>> I know you know it makes it right
>> I know you know, you know, you know
>>
>> You make me so high
>> You make me sooooo
>>
>> high
>>
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