God, dont I know it, Max. Wonderful evocation of those moments.
I think it doesnt need the final couplet, though; let that remain
implication?
Doug
On 1-Sep-09, at 3:04 PM, Max Richards wrote:
> This prolonged senior moment,
> my life... what was I saying?
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