Andrew last line great 'Comments, suggestions and criticisms all welcome.'
But should be spaced out :-)
Hey I like this new lean you-watch out for those back pews !!
P cheers
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of andrew burke
Sent: 27 August 2009 09:54
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Subject: snap; sort of
This started as a snap, then I got lost in language, tightened, edited, and
here it is: I call it Heritage, but that could change:
habits and tics
of language and
perhaps faith
paperthin
as it was
~
and music
set elusive
on my hands
and feet
for reel
~
How knuckles
learn so easily
fast to fight
in fear and
loathing
~
swollen now
as the tongue
dumb Kyrie
in a back pew
Comments, suggestions and criticisms all welcome.
Andrew
http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
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