You got it goin' on, Brian----the things being people; the soundalikes; the
every-word-counts; the solid slappy rhythms; the drama and its characters;
the clear story; the wholeness; and the fresh fresh utterly fresh nutty
poet's view.
Keep us awash in your poems, then. Only stop for an occasional slithering
lunch on the yellow grasses. <!!>
Best,
Judy
2009/7/21 Brian Hawkins <[log in to unmask]>
> Blacksnake
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> Blacksnake, easy as the wind
> making the grasses nod
> in yellow agreement, saying
> Yes, he passed this way; yes
> he could might still
> be close – glimpse
> of a rosy coil, shifting –
> zephyr crawling at ground level
> in brazen winter sun
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> Brian
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