ha. no worries
knock yourself out!
On Wed, Jul 8, 2009 at 12:17 AM, Patrick McManus <
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> Angel ah that' A shooting star, from moons ago spotted by two young lovers
> star gazing
> while laying down on a suburban driveway in the month of may,
>
> a poem in itself
>
> A shooting star
> from moons ago
> spotted by
> two young lovers
> star gazing
> while laying down
> on a suburban driveway
> in the month of may,
>
> excuse me playing with your poem could not resist
> P
>
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Angel Marquez
> Sent: 08 July 2009 08:01
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: snappage ?There is something in the fragmented air tonight...
>
> Taste
>
>
> Oceans of fire consumed the torrent valley
>
> Filling the air with a pungent aroma that spelled
>
> New beginning
>
>
> A deep closed eye 4 count inhale
>
> Secured the thought of victory
>
>
> A sharp sensation at the rear center of the skull
>
> Followed by a quick sonic zip
>
>
> An odd penetration
>
>
> A warm release greeted by a wondering finger
>
>
> Last exhale dissipates
>
>
> A fall
>
>
> Eyes remain closed
>
>
> Forever
>
>
> The universe centers in and collapses to the last beat of a palpitating
> cause
>
>
> A shooting star, from moons ago spotted by two young lovers star gazing
> while laying down on a suburban driveway in the month of may,
>
> finally makes sense
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