As usual, strong stuff Ken, but I felt that you will probably edit it
somehow, tho I'm not sure how. it's just that I kept feeling that it
might be both a bit tighter & that the narrative might come a bit
clearer (I think I mean the sense of thought & feeling).
See? I am caught but a bit confused....
Doug
On 18-May-09, at 9:32 AM, Kenneth Wolman wrote:
> IN THE EARLY FALL OF 1978 BILLY JOEL BECOMES MY LORD AND SAVIOR
Douglas Barbour
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contemplation to our western fact: to Rise,
Decline, Fall, to futility and larks,
to the bright crustaceans of the oversky.
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