but isnt that first line 'when the'?
A wonderful way to go?
Doug
On 15-Apr-09, at 3:06 AM, Patrick McManus wrote:
> Revissioni!
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Patrick McManus [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> Sent: 15 April 2009 09:59
> To: 'Poetryetc: poetry and poetics'
> Subject: snap pat snap _(_)_ Wednesday, 15 April 2009
>
> SUPPORT
>
> when he
> elderly gentleman
> turning and suddenly
> coming inadvertently
> face to face
> with her large
> magnificent cleavage
> he became
> all dizzy
> thinking of
> flying buttresses
> swirling galaxies
> then overcome
> near fainting
> had to
> immediately
> grab for support
> and it was
> fortunate that
> she was wearing
> a superfirm
> doubly reinforced
> extra duty
> sports bra
>
> he later
> after a
> kiss of life
> woke up in
> intensive care
> his pacemaker
> wildly beating
> on red alert
>
>
> pmcmanus
> q412
> ps VB is no so well
> has not bitten anyone for a whole week
> let alone scratched
>
Douglas Barbour
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