It's fun to watch it ll with you, Max, but I'd say the final two
stanzas work the best, & are a complete poem in themselves....
Doug
On 21-Apr-09, at 7:31 PM, Max Richards wrote:
> Catch of the Day at the Bay
Douglas Barbour
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There's the wind and the rain
And the mercy of the fallen
Who say they have no claim to know what's right
Dar Williams
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