Fascinating, fred; I think both of them or least gesture towards that
final comment,
*It’s superb what you did – all that driving –
quite apart from why
or where.*
a sense, in the poem, despite the eruptions of ordinary human
nastiness, that there was something to desire in all that...? whether
merely dreamed or actually experienced.... how you work a lyric
narrative ....
Doug
On 7-Mar-09, at 10:48 AM, Frederick Pollack wrote:
> Recycle & Course of Years
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