I like this, Tina. A mysterious little narrative that reminds me of your
many months ago poem about the woman in stiletto heels. You pull us in with
that elusive grab-bag rubric "fine", and your physical reaction to hearing
it. We wonder who 'you' is and what the relationship is between the two
people. You give us lots of room to roam around in our own 'you'
memories....
Thanks,
Judy
2009/3/6 Tina Bass <[log in to unmask]>
> > and when you say 'it's fine'
> >
> > it's fine in the way that
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> > all your decisions are fine
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> >
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> > and I bow my head as you leave
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> >
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> > when you say 'fine'
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> > I repeat, 'fine' over and over
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> > until my mantra
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> >
> >
> > starts picking up pieces
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > puts them together
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