Thanks all very much for comments much appreciated good poetryetc -cor!
being read around the world amazing !!new years bests keep snapping and all
those learned conversations over my head (thank goodness):-)
Patrick the olden
Ps we have not had a good flame war lately!!
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Subject: : early pat snap! ,&. ,&. ,&. Tuesday, 30 December 2008 correction!
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he looked down
down into the depths
of his poetry well
but could see nothing
but still hopefully
he lowered his bucket
it disappeared
into inky darkness
furthest recesses
before a plash
could be heard
when later
he wound it up
he was saddened
only to find
a few bent commas
and a cracked full stop
but then heartened
underneath
in the grimy silt
there lay glittering
a pure shining
burnished gold
ampersand!
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pmcmanus
q365
for Peter Ciccariello
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