Hard to know what to say: I thought it simple, & yes, the enjambement
was a focus. but (if you've read as an editor you'll know what I mean)
also am so sick of so many writers no longer having any idea of how to
use prepositions.
Anyway, the 'by' implied 'comparison' as the next word....
Just a little snap, is all (including of the actual moon here that
night)....
Doug
On 16-Dec-08, at 4:41 PM, kasper salonen wrote:
> I took, probably wrongly, the "by" to be a bit of a joke, i.e.
> 'written by'.
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