Do you need 'a childe / is a knight's apprentice'? Those who studied it know
this, perhaps. It seemed to interrupt the tone and could be attributed to
the author not the persona.
Tone is born of text and spirit is loosed by the letter ... I like it a lot.
Andrew
2008/11/12 Frederick Pollack <[log in to unmask]>
> Thanks, I think.
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> text : poem : : letter : spirit
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