Doug,
I enjoy the startling reversal with which you open, but keep coming back to that great
fifth line, "a default mould". The first four times I translated, homolinguistically, "mould"
into "mold".
Barry
On Wed, 1 Oct 2008 11:58:37 -0600, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
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>Nature will
>still ape art
>all ways
>the Impressionists
>a default mould
>trees in the valley
>variegated &
>intertwined colours
>meld a sweep
>collusion before
>our eyes
>
>01 X 08
>Douglas Barbour
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>http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
>
>Latest books:
>Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
>http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
>Wednesdays'
>http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
>
>bleary with hashish at a ghazal dud show
>in Kurdistan, soaring Muslim melodies
>over a smoked-out Jamaican one drop
>
> Brian Francis Slattery
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